Comments by "Guts" (@guts60) on "Why Is Hollywood Slowly Giving Up?" video.

  1. I 100% agree. However, my one criticism of your comment is not the message, but how you conveyed it. Literally how you conveyed it. Too many commas. Reading your comment is rather awkward with all the commas making brief pauses. Remember that a comma represents a brief pause in verbal speech to bring up a side point or deflect in conversation, but in a written form. If you ever read what you type in your mind, think to yourself “should I briefly pause in my sentence here?” and decide if you should get rid of the comma or replace it with a period. Likewise and on the opposite end, if you are reading what you typed and realize that there should be a brief pause somewhere, then add a comma (or a semicolon but that’s under niche circumstances). I used to struggle with it too, sometimes I still misplace or misuse commas when typing. You eventually get the hang of it, and it’s an important tool in any writer/typer’s arsenal. I hope this reply doesn’t come off as demeaning or condescending in any way. I’m just trying to be friendly and helpful :D
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  2. Man, I just want to watch a movie and forget about life for the next 1.5-3 hours. I work, I go to school, I have a myriad of things to do every day. And yet whenever I sit down to watch a new movie that I was even slightly intrigued in seeing, I get force fed political garbage and end up feeling even more exhausted. Hell, I’m barely even watching the movie anyway because I’m watching while doing a myriad of things If you want to have political messaging, at least be more subtle about it so that I don’t notice. I don’t care if little kids get brainwashed by the subtle shit. If I don’t even have the time to crank my hog or take my dog on a proper walk anymore, then I don’t have the time to worry about future generations.
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