Comments by "Peter deWolf" (@StoneShards) on "The New Burning Times, Now Available! (Link in Description!)" video.
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"Making the point" is a fine art, in severe decline! I always bitch at the likes of Jim Jordan: "C'mon, Jim, tie it together IN NO UNCERTAIN TERMS!" But...no...he seems to think what is self-evident to him is as clear to others. He'll list a string of facts, that, unfortunately, take a lot of words and dissipate listener focus; then, he just stops, like he's waiting for his listeners to...understand, I guess. All he has to do is put a bow on it: "These facts MEAN...this...", where, "this", is a place-holder for a short, single sentence, STATEMENT of conclusion.
Occult authors suffer as much as anyone from this "blind side bias", though some do seem to pay attention to the value of organizational schemas in presentation. But, as a group, editors suffer too...hahaha...
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