Comments by "Logik" (@philonetic321) on "THAT'S ALL FOLKS! Ukrainians ENCIRCLE Z-Army and FORCE THEM TO SURRENDER in Kharkiv. 2022 Peace Plan" video.
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As the other comment pointed out, it's the way you say it. If it's same every time, flat, serious, then to the point, it's better.
You started to say it like a comedian and looking away from the camera, so it got silly. When you keep it serious like a news caster then it's good.
I would not remove it or move it, just make it a standard intro, more serious, the same every time. I know it sounds boring, but the news is boring for a reason too.
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