Comments by "Krysnha Rodriguez" (@Krysnha) on "" video.
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What are you expecting a hero that start being a dumb fool and cares little for others, and because meeting someone that point in the rigth direction and give a valuable lesson in life, and after facing lost and realization that life is more than just onself, that our acction have consecuences she want to repent and improve herself to become someone better, no, that is old stuff, that is old and dumb, lets do a perfect hero that cant, fail, cant be wounded, cant be hurt and is superior to everyone
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Like Az from Hell vs Baby face put it, when he was reviewing batwaman, one of the ways he would change it, was in the first episode, she disguise as batman, she pretend to be batman, because the people need him back, only when in a moment they see her hair and see she is a woman, they will give her a batwoman, the idea being she give the people hope, but for her the suit being a heroine is not about helping is find who she care, and only they recognice her, the suit figthing crime is all for her goals not others
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All the DEI scholarship that enter, meaning she is the best of the worst, also by no mean of imagination she is better than stark, also i dont read the character, her general body is more fit than what i would wait for a super hero that uses her mind, would have been better that she have a friend that is the one tht acutlay uses the suit, imaigne these, a friend of her that is smart, lets make it acutaly good.
Imagine a red heair or blonde girl that is the one in MIT, lets put she is disable, or better yet lets start she is fine, she is sexy a real nerd girl but with a relativly nice body, but she wants to use her knowledge for medicine, imagine automate cirgunes or automate bots, they dont know each other, one day Riris family, mom or friend get sick or better yet cancer, and when in hospital these other girl, the one that build crap, is there she is the one that acutaly admire stark because thanks to him she could study with start industrys scholarship program, she knew Tony because she is sexy for her age, and start try to take her to bed but she is a minor, and he was drunk and start talking about his dad, how he wants a family and he feel bad for what he did, his machines and knowledge, the girl takes to heart and wants to build something for the good will of mankind.
She build these automate cirgunes for proceders a human hand is not enougth precise not to replace but to complement, when see Riris mom or friend or whatever she ask, if she can show her machine, and give a demonstration as no one is sure, because there is no choice accpet, the machine is precise, and with care, the cancer is remove even when it is metastasise and lietarly clean the body.
Healing and she didnt charge at all, to make even a step further, make Riri see her one day before knowing each other and because she is blonde and sexy, Riri call her Barbie or insult her, call her cow because big knockers, or said o you white people are bad because white and that, when Riri was desperate to save her mom as she dies, and heard one doctor wants to help because she heard that a girl is near her and she see her, Ririr seen her crying and angry didnt beleive she was the doctor and start to tell o that is she another one a dumb blonde and white these and that, she said nothing, make her mom sign and past to prepare the procedure, as the idea is these machine can be use for cases no cure is available and she was working in more ideas, you can see where i am going i mean millions lost in medicine for these machine, that once build can endure for decades with minimum check up, and design for all parts of the world, Riri cant beleive and the only thing the girl do was giving her a note and she leave, not talking to her, the note said remember a white supremacist save your mom and build a machine to save many, what did you do, Riri tell her mom, her mom angry slap her in the face because what she said to the girl, she tell Riri with clear disapointment, i didnt teach you to hate someone because the color of skin, people should be respected and treated acording to theyre character not theyre appearance and demand Ririr goes and apology and thanks her, when Riri was going to thanks her, she see the house on fire of the girlr and she run risking her life, finding her under rubble she use her strength again her body is more of a fit woman than someone using mind, and she take her out, she also get burn and is in pain, the girl trap tell her to leave that dont risk her life, Ririr answer you save mi mom and for everyone you will be more usefull, more important.
She save her, worst the prototipe was destroy and she is afraid, but seen that the plans for the bed and automate machine are in the university Riri goes there to try to recover even when she is hurt, when arrive the area is destroy and many are wounded.
The girl wounded and recovering worst she is now disable, as time pass they talk to each other nothing big, and worst she see her machine, but instead for being free is sold to major hospitals and only for the rich and elite, or reserved, she think is ok, they will at least heal people, later on they deliver a mass production model
But as time pass people die, all who uses the bed mass produce model die, in months or sometimes become sterile, they are using it against the poor, she contact Riri, she wants to find out and she build the suit, so eh can find what is going on.
These is bases i would use, changes i hate they said she is female and the suit is masculine, make the suit bublegum crisis stile enfacising hips and breasts showing femenininty, to show these is a female, second to separate from Stark is a mix high teck but her weapons are sword and shield to give idea old and new, separate from start, also the idea brain and brawl.
These is a bases how i would do, showing both Riri starting as someone that dont give a crap anyone, she only care herself, money, she see people only color skin, and a moment in life force her to see beyond, she has to admit what she is and finally see she was wrong and risk her life for others, ending with her admitting that there are things bigger than her that she can also help
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