Comments by "Brad Camroux" (@camrouxbg) on "This Is the Calculus They Won't Teach You" video.

Congratulations! You deserve it! You're well on your way to being a producer of great math and science exposition videos. Very happy for you 😊
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Okay... you really need to incorporate pauses into your narration. This moves far too fast for anyone to actually absorb anything without pausing, but if you pause it, you have to go back because it cuts off more of your explanation. Think about how you would speak in person. When going through the circle-vs-rectangle argument, you turn it into a continuous stream of narration. You would never speak like this in person. You would have pauses. Also, it really feels like you mumble a bit and aren't speaking very clearly. Aside from this, the content is very good, and your explanations are quite helpful. The animations are great and even though it can be a little jerky at time it is much more entertaining to watch than chalk on a board.
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@AWellRestedDog most welcome. I am sorry if it came off as harsh. Thats not the intent at all. I really do like the content and the style. And now that I actually see your username, the dogs make more sense. One thought for them, too: perhaps try altering your voice slightly when you're speaking for the dogs. They would certainly have a different voice from you, and it would be easier to differentiate (pun intended!) them from the rest of the speech. Over all I would say you're on the right track. Try to be mindful of some of these things (it won't all come at once) and I think you'll notice a remarkable difference. Please do keep working on creating videos! 😃
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@AWellRestedDog also, for the record, I'm glad to see someone else putting this content out. I thought of Brassoud's book immediately on seeing the title of the video, and was not disappointed. Kudos also on the interview segment. That was a really nice touch. I wanted to make sure you had some positive feedback from me also, so you know I wasn't only critical of the video. I really did enjoy it ☺️
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I totally agree. Surprised to see only praise on here and no other constructive feedback. Praise is well deserved, but there are certainly areas or parts that can be improved.
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