Comments by "TinLeadHammer" (@TinLeadHammer) on "" video.

  1. You've got three shots of the car moving, albeit on the same road, this is a start. Now, when you describe features like cupholders or transmission tunnel - or absence of it - you need to show it. I understand this is a budget video with no cameraman, and you do not feel cool enough to use a smartphone on a selfie stick, so you need to shoot relevant B-roll and edit it in. Better yet, watch Tom Voelk's videos, whenever he can show ("this, this and this") he shows it, not talks about it. Video is a visual medium, this is not radio. If all I see is you talking, I would rather read it and look at still shots. Otherwise, a decent second effort, visually. A great effort in terms of presentation. Unless you learned all you lines by heart - which I doubt - you are very good talking off the cuff into a camera. Props! P.S. Do not use fake zoom/pan over still images, looks cheap. P.P.S. In-house navi instead of CarPlay/AndroidAuto? Nah.
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  2. Mirage? Yuck.
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